Well, ultimately I liked it. I suspect it left more questions hanging than it answered. And the last ten minutes seemed a bit rushed.
Oh, yeah: And the sound you heard at the end was the mass explosion of the brains of every teen fangirl on the planet. Stay away from fanfiction.net if you value your sanity. ;-) (That will only make sense to people who saw the ending, I hope.)
Date: 7/7/2008 10:18:52 PM